Wednesday, June 27, 2007


[Thank you so much for your comments guys ^_^ i really appreciate it. Ok due to the fact that "the person" am dedicating this poem didn't really "gave up" on me. So i will make it "give up"]

One of my instant poem that was inspired by too much thoughts of ......... anyway here it goes:

Don't give up easily
Try to break the walls if you can

Just don't give up on me
I want you to see who I am

Have patience in me
Coz I'm still in the process of healing

Sorry I can not trust that easily
But in time I will be.


your comments are highly appreciated.

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  1. Ngapala: i played here Pachelbel's Canon in D, for some other reason and not for the request of g0ma :)

    the thoughts that inspired me to composed one... in short related po siya sa Poem.

  2. I believe it's
    don't give up easily...

  3. awss.. ask ko sana kung sino ang composer .. ahehe.. ikaw pala. i also have pachelbel songs (rock, piano, violin, flute and others.. ) ganda ng songs...ahehe

  4. don't get me wrong, pero di ba dapat "don't give up"? hehehe!

  5. ahihihi maraming salamat po sa mga corrections

    bale "gave up" po kasi i felt natapos na siya mag "give up" kaya "gave up" na siya

    pero tama po talaga "Give up" po talaga kaya lang since "past tense" na bale "gave up" na

    sige na nga bale hindi naman siya nag "gave up" feeling ko lang pala un... so gawain ko nalang present tense un additional poem ^_^

    maraming salamat po

  6. well, ok naman po sya. naisip ko lang kasi... in strict grammar, you can't use the past tense of a term such as "gave up" on a statement which says "do not". you can't ask kasi someone to NOT do something that's already done.

    pasensya na po, gusto ko lang sabihin.


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If you look at my lips
will you know it's meant for you?

Everything happens for reasons...
Every moment has its own seasons...

The right time will come,
we will be together for eternity,
The right moment will come
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