[Thank you so much for your comments guys ^_^ i really appreciate it. Ok due to the fact that "the person" am dedicating this poem didn't really "gave up" on me. So i will make it "give up"]
One of my instant poem that was inspired by too much thoughts of ......... anyway here it goes:
Don't give up easily
Try to break the walls if you can
Just don't give up on me
I want you to see who I am
Have patience in me
Coz I'm still in the process of healing
Sorry I can not trust that easily
But in time I will be.
~Aice
your comments are highly appreciated.
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ReplyDeletethe thoughts that inspired me to composed one... in short related po siya sa Poem.
I believe it's
ReplyDeletedon't give up easily...
awss.. ask ko sana kung sino ang composer .. ahehe.. ikaw pala. i also have pachelbel songs (rock, piano, violin, flute and others.. ) ganda ng songs...ahehe
ReplyDeletedon't get me wrong, pero di ba dapat "don't give up"? hehehe!
ReplyDeleteahihihi maraming salamat po sa mga corrections
ReplyDeletebale "gave up" po kasi i felt natapos na siya mag "give up" kaya "gave up" na siya
pero tama po talaga "Give up" po talaga kaya lang since "past tense" na bale "gave up" na
sige na nga bale hindi naman siya nag "gave up" feeling ko lang pala un... so gawain ko nalang present tense un additional poem ^_^
maraming salamat po
well, ok naman po sya. naisip ko lang kasi... in strict grammar, you can't use the past tense of a term such as "gave up" on a statement which says "do not". you can't ask kasi someone to NOT do something that's already done.
ReplyDeletepasensya na po, gusto ko lang sabihin.
@alia... ok salamat po sa lecture ^_^
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